What I like most about my writing is that it's realy funny.
Next time,i will work on expanding my funny part.
Overall,all i feel happy about my story.
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8 comments:
Stephanie S. story is cool!!!
I like your story because you fell in the mudd
hahahahahahh thats so funny
i like your story it is funny hahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!
When you fell in the mud I starded to laught that's funny!!!!!!!!!
i like my story because when i fell in the puddle of mud
I like this story because you fell in the mud... then you got jumped on... then you got jumped on again! Unbelievable! This is a very funny story. I think you are right in your reflection that you should work on expanding your funny part. The details make your story really great.
since i read it again i didnt get it it was confusing
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