Friday, September 21, 2007

That Night by Alexis G.


What I like about my writing is that I wrote 5 paragraphs. If I did it over again, I would imprve it by not taking so much time on typing it. Overall, I feel very good about my story because it was 5 paragraphs and because I had a lot of details.

4 comments:

Jeff Lewis said...

Great use of dialogue. I also think this story is very funny because you explain very well how your grandmother "could practically smell the turkey burning" on TV, when it was actually your soup. Very good story.

abigailm said...

your soup burned,so funny

ashlyn z said...

I like all the details.

stephanie w said...

I like your storey because it is fun to read.