The mystery bag

The best part of my essay is making up all of the stuff that is in the bag and changing the names of the teachers.

The part that still needs work is the ending because it does int have that much details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is that it has to be about you.

Next time I write an expository assay I would like to add more details.

Chameleon

1.The best part of my story was when I wrout about the chameleans.

2the part that stills needs work is the font.

3the mian thing I learnd about expository writing is when Ihad fun

4 Next timeI will write something else

The teacher placed a bag on my desk...

The best part of my essay is my writing.

The part that still needs work is my spalling.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is to correct my own writing.

How to Feed a Chameleon

1.The best part of my essay is when you get to see the chameleon eat.

2. The part that steel needs work is to not to use a lot of words.

3.The main thing I learned expository writing is that it is hard.

4. Next time I write about my family.

evil sponges

1.The best part of my essay is when I always use voice in my stories because thats how you make your story funny.

2.The part that still needs work is the conclusion because its hard to think of endings.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writting is expository writting is stories that are made up.

4.Next time I write an expository essay, I would like to write about electronics that are not computers or laptops. Like phones,ipods and wires.

All the details I put in my writing are the best part of my writing.

I thing my fourth paragraph still needs work.

I learnd expostory writing is fun to write.

I shouldwrite more paragraph's in my expository writing.

1.The best part of my essay is the middle because it hais a lot of details.

2.The part that still needs work is the bgining because it needs to be biger.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writing is how to make something.

4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make it biger.

Camping

The best part of my essay is when I taught you how to play Bunco.

The part that still needs work is expanding the details.

The main thing I learned about expository writing is the reds, greens,and yellows.

Next time I write an expository writing, I would like to write about my dog.

WHAT'S IN THE BAG

My expository essay

I think the best part of my essay is when the class found out that the chameleons were in the bag.I think my second paragraph could still be improved.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you mostly explain something.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my paragraphs longer. Sincerly, Alexis

The mystery bag

1. 1. the best part of my essay is when theres a cat on the bag.

2. the part that still needs work is the conclusion.

3.the main thing I learned about expository writing is to check teds cups.

4. next, time I write an expository essay, I would like to change my conclusion.

how two

1.The best part of my essay is. . .when I say we lick the peanut butter off the knife.

2.The part that still needs work is third sentence.

3.The thing I learn about exspository writing is have fun.

4. Next time I will write about drawing.

How to make a blue spark!

1. The best part of my essay is the spark!
2. The part that still needs work is how exciting it is.
3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you have to explain something.
4. Next time I wite an expository essay, I would like to write about something thats more exiteing.

The Mystery Bag

1.The best part of my essay is that in the bag it is a baby puppy.

2.The part that still needs work on is the conclusion.

3.The main thing I learned about expository writing is that you can explain something.

4.Next time I write an expository essay I would like to make my essay more longer.

QUESTIONS FOR TEACHERS

In my reading group I am doing a project about what career I want when I grow up.So all the teachers that are visiting the blog please try to answer them.These questions are for anyone especially for my teacher Mr.Lewis and for any other teacher.

QUESTIONS FOR BEING A TEACHER

1. What do you like about your job?
2. How did you get interested in this job?
3. How much money do you get paid for being a teacher?
4. Is being a teacher hard if it is what is so hard about it?
5. What kinds of things do you do except for teaching?
6. Would you think this is a right job for me?
7. What kind of school would you think would be better for you and what grade?
8. If you had the opportunity to be a principal of your own school would you take it, if yes then why would you take the opportunity?

suprised

1. The best part of my essay is when I open the bag.

2. The part that still needs work is the conclusion

3.The main idea I learned about expositoy writing is about writing good and neat also about 5 paragraph.

4.Next time I write an expository essay , I would like to do more writing.

CHEFS

1. The best part of my writing is I get to cook all my ideas.

2. The part that still needs work is I should put more details.

3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is it is a writing about ethier your life or your future.

4.Next time I write a expository essay,I would like to write about the chameleons. Like what they do or what they eat and who they are married to.

My How-To writing, Taking Care of Chameleons

1. The best part of my essay is that I wrote about our cool class chameleons and that when you read my writing you could take care one of the chameleons at home by yourself.
2. The part is that still needs work is on my 2nd paragraph because I don't have so much details and sentences.
3. The main thing I learned about expository writing is to not try to do a perfect writng because nobody can is perfect. Also I learned that I should try not to rush on my writing.
4. Next time I do and expository essay, I would like to try to put 1 or 2 more sentences in my topic paragraph and my conclusion paragraph.

YOU ARE FREE...

... and living in the north. Would you have helped a slave escape to freedom? The answer seems easy, but there were serious consequences for people who were caught helping slaves.

Comment by telling me if you would have helped and why or why not.

YOU ARE A SLAVE...

... and you just took a journey through the underground railroad to get your freedom. What kinds of difficulties did you encounter? Were the difficulties worth it? Why were you willing to endure these difficulties?

Folsom People

The Folsom People method of hunting was knives,spears but the Folsom points were smaller than the Clovis.

The Folsom People ate buffalo,deer,seeds,nuts and fruits.

The Folsom People lived in tepees and caves.

The Folsom People cooked and then split the buffaloes.They also spoke different languages.The flood uncovered unusually large bison bones .George McJunkin discovered them after a flash flood.